sasurfer
commented
2 years ago it's all fine with me but for one change. This one:
- More recent versions of synthea yield data that can not be ingested by the ETL-Synthea tool only after some columns cutting and editing.
- More recent versions of Synthea yield data that cannot be ingested by the ETL-Synthea tool only, but after some columns' cutting and editing.
The comma at the end is misleading. Gives the wrong sense to the sentence. Maybe we could change it all to: More recent versions of Synthea yield data that cannot be directly ingested by the ETL-Synthea. They need some cutting and editing in order to be ready to be used.
or something similar to this sentence
NuriaQueralt
Dear @sasurfer and @ljgarcia, I made some last edits to this part that you both contributed. Could you please review them? Many thanks in advance.