Instead of bullet point, try to describe the utilized datasets in paragraph form. You introduce Table 1 on page 1, but do not actually insert it into the document until page 3. Insert the data table immediately after you introduce it. Also, the table has a lot of information. Break down the significant points for the reader to help guide the reader. For your next draft, try to weave your analysis within the statistics and findings that directly relate to your project. Don’t just provide a finding; rather, provide an explicit explanation of what is interesting about this finding and how it ties back to your question.
Instead of bullet point, try to describe the utilized datasets in paragraph form. You introduce Table 1 on page 1, but do not actually insert it into the document until page 3. Insert the data table immediately after you introduce it. Also, the table has a lot of information. Break down the significant points for the reader to help guide the reader. For your next draft, try to weave your analysis within the statistics and findings that directly relate to your project. Don’t just provide a finding; rather, provide an explicit explanation of what is interesting about this finding and how it ties back to your question.