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Module for intake of special use applications for Forest Service Application Permits
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As a user I would like to know how to harvest a tree safely (tools, procedure) #8

Open sadlerw opened 7 years ago

sadlerw commented 7 years ago

Acceptance Criteria

note: make sure tasks are specific to page and safety info, winnow out the most important safety concerns and make sure usability shows users get them

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sethalt commented 6 years ago

This site has some good safety recommendations for tree cutting in Arapaho: https://www.fs.fed.us/r2/recreation/christmas/index-primary-areas.shtml

sethalt commented 6 years ago

Flathead safety instructions from: https://www.fs.usda.gov/Internet/FSE_DOCUMENTS/stelprdb5402386.pdf

sethalt commented 6 years ago

Key safety points from the Mt. Hood video staring Amber here: https://www.fs.usda.gov/detail/mthood/passes-permits/forestproducts/?cid=stelprd3793203

JaneZC commented 6 years ago

After reviewing everything, I recommend eliminating the safety section and combining it into the Planning Your Trip section. Much of the information compiled for safety ... matches (or corresponds to) what we already have in the Planning Your Trip section. This would also dovetail with the finding that users want safety information sprinkled throughout the content instead of highlighted in a single section.

I would strongly encourage graphics that highlight the safety information be added to the Planning Your Trip section (and sprinkled elsewhere through the page). For example, we could have a graphic in 'before you cut' that corresponds to 'don't forget your tarp.' In Planning Your Trip, we could have a graphic that talks about no cell phone coverage. In When To Cut, we might want a graphic about dressing warmly. etc. etc. I believe there's already a pending story about graphics and we can add a task there to ensure that safety is given consideration when developing graphics. (Will - not sure if I'm supposed to add that as a specific task or if that's something someone else does after discussion among the group? Just let me know.)

The Planning Your Trip document is tracked changes for content updates; the Safety Information document is a research document of points that folks either pointed out or were pulled together. (Thanks again Seth!)

Planning Your Trip Redux https://app.zenhub.com/files/106473503/b4c8ea2b-31fc-4af3-9977-e50f8a49155d/download

Safety Information Research https://app.zenhub.com/files/106473503/f9b19b45-84be-4d73-b0af-43d921924c95/download

ASprinkle commented 6 years ago

@JaneZC in reviewing the planning your trip Redux: Please make sure font style and size is consistent. Remove language/bullets regarding snowmobiles and pets - these bits of information are not consistent across forests. I agree with Jane's recommendation - I think it would be best to have only 1 section Either Planning your Trip, or Safety Information, and I think "Planning Your Trip" sounds more exciting.

JaneZC commented 6 years ago

Minor changes below to the text.

The "Trip Planning" header should be changed to How to plan your trip (to match the left-hand navigation). Then, delete the second header that says "planning your trip." It is not necessary.

Eliminate the space between the l and (s) in shovel(s).

Add a comma after non-existent in this sentence. "Cell service is spotty, or non-existent in many National Forests."

ASprinkle commented 6 years ago

I have reviewed - it looks good. I thought we were going to take out the word "harvest". I like the description of why you should make a fresh cut when you get home and put your tree in water, but it might be too much detail. - Oh, i see my comment about "places to try" is captured in a different story - right on!

sadlerw commented 6 years ago

If we want to change "harvest" to "cut" in the title that's fine. Just need to know. We could add it as a task on #93 too.

MelissaBraxton commented 6 years ago

Some inconsistency in how "rules" are indicated here. Some of the list items in "how to cut" and "how to plan your trip" state actions/items that are prohibited, yet these are not marked as rules.

Indentation on UL under H3 bullets appears inconsistent. (Indentation is greater under "when you cut")

Thick gray horizontal rule at the end of the "how to cut section" appears to be missing.