Closed seabbs closed 2 years ago
See: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GbAsu1ZZsnm6Wl0WQA0g6LbpRucrLs4gRjpg97DUAA8/edit for the suggested reorganisation and further comments.
I've included some of the suggesed changes and structure but not all of it as I wanted to make sure the focus stayed in the right place. We can discuss more in the next round of comments.
Pull out the suggested reorganised introduction and compare to what is currently there.