The "who needs ether" section was phrased strangely, they should either have been put into bullet points, or turned into a single sentence. If you try to put it into a single sentence, it leads to the odd repetition of "and" in the same sentence. I decided to use bullet points, even though it might have been overkill for just 2 items.
Either way works, but the original certainly doesn't read right.
The "who needs ether" section was phrased strangely, they should either have been put into bullet points, or turned into a single sentence. If you try to put it into a single sentence, it leads to the odd repetition of "and" in the same sentence. I decided to use bullet points, even though it might have been overkill for just 2 items.
Either way works, but the original certainly doesn't read right.