Closed TheAdventureCore closed 11 years ago
Sounds good enough. Maintains the meaning of all sentences, but make them flow better. Just a little thing:
00:21:59 full power on both sides
Should be capitalized:
00:21:59 Full power on both sides.
After that I will merge. As always, thank you for the contribution.
Actually, I can fix that myself later. Merged.
No problem, Cap'n. I'll keep an eye out for that kind of stuff in the future.
I have just realized you weren't on the Collaborator list. Added! Now you have full control over the repository, to make commits directly.
Thanks, dude! I'll be making some changes, and if you don't like them, though, feel free to change them!
Some sentences were changed mainly because they sound rather clunky and awkward in english. These are only proposed changes, let me know if there's an issue.