Polished a few sentences.

eva3 / Evangelion--3.0-Translation

Evangelion: 3.0 You Can (Not) Redo. (ヱヴァンゲリヲン新劇場版：Q) translation

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Polished a few sentences. #17

Closed TheAdventureCore closed 11 years ago

TheAdventureCore commented 11 years ago

Some sentences were changed mainly because they sound rather clunky and awkward in english. These are only proposed changes, let me know if there's an issue.

eva3 commented 11 years ago

Sounds good enough. Maintains the meaning of all sentences, but make them flow better. Just a little thing:

00:21:59 full power on both sides

Should be capitalized:

00:21:59 Full power on both sides.

After that I will merge. As always, thank you for the contribution.

eva3 commented 11 years ago

Actually, I can fix that myself later. Merged.

TheAdventureCore commented 11 years ago

No problem, Cap'n. I'll keep an eye out for that kind of stuff in the future.

eva3 commented 11 years ago

I have just realized you weren't on the Collaborator list. Added! Now you have full control over the repository, to make commits directly.

TheAdventureCore commented 11 years ago

Thanks, dude! I'll be making some changes, and if you don't like them, though, feel free to change them!