Closed TheAdventureCore closed 11 years ago
Changed "I'm just gonna brute this!" To "I'm going in!" I feel like this makes it flow a little better.
Also, changed "Um, it's a late hour" to "Um, it's late"
Changed "Right. It's Eva's Curse." to "Right. It's the Eva's Curse.
Changed "But I saved her at that time!" to "But I saved her!"
Changed "The outcome was finding you" to "We only found you."
Thank you.
Changed "I'm just gonna brute this!" To "I'm going in!" I feel like this makes it flow a little better.
Also, changed "Um, it's a late hour" to "Um, it's late"
Changed "Right. It's Eva's Curse." to "Right. It's the Eva's Curse.
Changed "But I saved her at that time!" to "But I saved her!"
Changed "The outcome was finding you" to "We only found you."