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Minor grammatical point in effects/http.md #149

Closed nelsonic closed 6 years ago

nelsonic commented 6 years ago

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Hi @evancz thanks for 0.19 🎉 and thanks for updating the guide. Busy going through it now to update my knowledge.

In https://guide.elm-lang.org/effects/http.html if you scroll down to the section: image

"In this example uses The Elm Architecture, just like we have seen in all the previous examples."

Feels like there is either a missing word or a word too many in this sentence.

Possible fix:

Note: I'm not a "grammar police" at all. My docs are much worse! I just noticed this while reading and figured it was easy enough to report and fix.

nelsonic commented 6 years ago

PR: https://github.com/evancz/guide.elm-lang.org/pull/150 Went with removal of the "in" rather than adding words. Hope this is Ok. Thanks again.