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evebrnd / eps

Project carried out as part of the EPS semester at Oslo Metropolitan University. This is an educational site that aims to raise awareness on smart home devices' privacy and transparency
https://evebrnd.github.io/eps/
MIT License
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some copy editing #70

Closed Jappie3 closed 1 month ago

Jappie3 commented 1 month ago

pretty much done with 1, 2 & 4 - skimmed over 3 I'm really not sure about the dragon w/ the pile of gold analogy in 3 xD

btw lmk if you don't agree with something, this is just me reading everything & changing stuff to what I think sounds the best

Jappie3 commented 1 month ago

oh apparently private repo's don't have draft PRs? imagine this is a draft - not ready for merging yet!

Jappie3 commented 1 month ago

done, still waiting on #69 to provide sources for some claims

Jappie3 commented 1 month ago

should be good, maybe a review before merging?

Jappie3 commented 1 month ago

squashed & rebased locally