eveningdong / New_York_State_Inpatients_Medical_Treatment_and_Hospital_Recommender_System_Design

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Midterm review cfw56 #12

Open catweld opened 8 years ago

catweld commented 8 years ago

Firstly I'm a little confused with this report as it's titled New York State Inpatients Morality Prediction but it's in a file called Movie or Earthquakes. I would go in and update your project name to minimize confusion. Overall your midterm report is well researched and provides a lot of background on your thought process. You also make great use of the tables and graphs and providing evidence for your decision making. I think it would be even better if you provided more information on each graph/table so that I know what I'm looking for a little better. I'd also like a little bit more information on how you determined which variables were irrelevant initially and dive into your thought process a little bit more. The overall structure of your report is well organized and the purpose of your project is very clear. To make the report flow a little better, I would suggest using a paragraph form for your next steps section as the list isn't explained and feels unfinished. Overall, Great job!