Closed pronoiac closed 1 year ago
This rework now has a repetition of "in" which is not the most pleasant to read. Can we avoid this?
I agree. Let's see, the original:
This is a technique used for TV broadcasts, such as in the NTSC standard in USA and Japan.
How about:
This is a technique used for TV broadcasts, for which the USA and Japan used the NTSC standard.
That sounds better!
It felt clunky and hard to read.