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The book of CPS-1
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ch 2: rework NTSC sentence #85

Closed pronoiac closed 1 year ago

pronoiac commented 1 year ago

It felt clunky and hard to read.

fabiensanglard commented 1 year ago

This rework now has a repetition of "in" which is not the most pleasant to read. Can we avoid this?

pronoiac commented 1 year ago

I agree. Let's see, the original:

This is a technique used for TV broadcasts, such as in the NTSC standard in USA and Japan.

How about:

This is a technique used for TV broadcasts, for which the USA and Japan used the NTSC standard.

fabiensanglard commented 1 year ago

That sounds better!