Closed noahmanger closed 7 years ago
For the following tools, I know we have begun implementation on the beta site, but each is in varying stages of completeness for functionality or data quality:
I would need our legal devs and subject matter experts to help point out the specific ways that the tools on the beta site differ, or have incomplete data, but I think we have enough to start crafting an approach and basic messaging.
Place the notice where it impacts the results you expect to see (or as close as we can get to that spot with the current site map)
These definitely benefit from content review, but I started with the template @emileighoutlaw set in https://github.com/18F/fec-cms/issues/836#issuecomment-284900830 for safe starting territory.
Set expectations for work in progress or not
Help users know what's different between the two experiences
Direct users to where the data is complete
Thoughts on any of the above?
Also — did I miss any other legal apps?
@jenniferthibault Thanks for making this ticket! I was talking to @AmyKort and @amypike yesterday and there's a few missing from your list. Here's the full list, I also put in links to the new landing pages on the new site for these items. I hope this helps!
This is great Pat, thank you! I'll adjust a few things and will update this issue again with a new iteration
Use the message pattern with the information icon.
I took a stab, but needs active work from @emileighoutlaw for the template she wants to establish for this notification type.
AOs
all search results list
MURS
all search results list
Alternative Dispute Resolution
Landing page
Administrative Fines
Fine calculator
Audit reports
Landing page
Rulemakings
This one is a little unusual, because we link to the Rulemaking is a section of the Regulations page. Since it's mid-page, maybe we use plain text links for now?
A few thoughts (and maybe better to discuss in design pairing, but logging here before I forget):
For AOs and MURs, I like the "info message" style. This feels like the right component and placement. But for language what about also adding something to more clearly differentiate the two tools, which would also include why you'd want to use the new one over the old.
For both of those messages in the search results, they feel perhaps a little too prominent. Should they be minimizable?
For ADRs and Admin Fines, what about taking the approach you suggested with rulemakings and just including regular links? Because there's not already some equivalent form of the tool on the new site, I think it's less important to call attention to their absence.
Language on all of these needs @emileighoutlaw , but I agree with your observation! On principle we should tell folks if there's more data/functionality on one or the other.
Love the idea of minimizing them on the data tables, I'll have that mocked up in a jiff!
The only reason I did plain-text links on rulemakings is because the text is written in paragraph style about the SERS tool. I'd prefer to use the alert style there too if we can. I think folks will be looking for these tools, so calling the users attention isn't about pointing out the absence, it's about helping them find there it lives.
Here's how the minimizing could work:
Toggle closed:
Sorry, I hit enter before finishing!
@emileighoutlaw are you ready to take this issue assignment over for content?
Just chatted with Jen about a few things and here's a couple take-aways:
For the link to SERS, we want to stick with the current implementation, which uses a button:
But instead of the heading and content here being about SERS, we think it makes the most sense for it to be about the actual substance of SERS (Rule making documents?). It can reference SERS, but should be oriented around what you'll actually find, no?
In the spirit of framing in terms of what you'll find rather than the system you're using, we think that instead of an alert style link to EQS from the ADR and AF pages, we could use the existing pattern of a block of copy + a button, like:
What do you think @emileighoutlaw ?
@emileighoutlaw below is a collected summary of the alert text needed. When possible, it would be good to communicate:
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Transferring over to you, Emileigh! Let us know if you want to pair up or have any questions on this
After waiting patiently for two weeks, I finally have a draft of some words 🔒 that we can look at for all of these things.
👀 @AmyKort definitely needs to review these blurbs.
💟 And as always, I love having @jenniferthibault's and @noahmanger's smart copyedit eyes whenever they have time.
This all looks great to me.
This works for me! I left one very small comment.
This content is approved by Amy and me. 🚀 We can move to implementation
Being implemented by https://github.com/18F/openFEC-web-app/issues/1900
At the time of the site flip, we will need to continue to provide links to EQS and the AO search, alongside our own searches for those items. So that legal researchers always know where they can get what information, we need to design the experience around how those two things co-exist.
Basically we need to address why one would use the new tools vs. the old tools, and provide links back to the old tools. We'll need to talk with @AmyKort more about how to message this in the interface.
cc @nickykrause @onezerojeremy @jenniferthibault