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[alfonsoeromero]

1) A veces se repiten algunas palabricas

Ejemplo, introducción del capítulo 1 (repeticiones en ...):

Initially the EAs were proposed as a fixed set of steps with differ- ent operators and data structures. Then, different ways to parallelize these algorithms were also proposed, with new classifications and op- erations. Nowadays, new emerging trends that deal with new technolo- gies (such as P2P or Cloud Computing) and new algorithmic methods (such as parameter adaptation) are being used. These trends require a new way to develop EAs taking into account some lacks, such as integration of heterogeneous elements or dynamic resources.

As can be seen, these kind of algorithms can be seen (además, el primero sería as it can be seen).

Algunas expresiones se repiten también un poquito. Te sugiero sinónimos: take into account -> take into consideration different -> several (cuando pueda sustituirse por la misma) usually (3 veces en "genetic programming") -> commonly, frequently

2) (posibles) Errorcillos

• Hay un "neuronal networks" por ahí (neural?)
• "Combining elements of previous algorithms with other heuristics are the base of Memetic Algorithms (MAs)." -> yo creo que es "is" en vez de "are"
• "Other EAs, that does not match" -> "Other EAs that do not match" (coma y "do")
• El pobre "Smith" se ha quedado sin h en una de las citas (Smit)

[JJ]

Muchas gracias por los comentarios, Alfonso.

[fergunet]

Arreglados!