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fix PR 408 #427

Open jmcmurry opened 3 years ago

jmcmurry commented 3 years ago

https://github.com/flattenthecurve/guide/pull/408

Evidence to date is more than adequate evidence to warrant continued vigilance. - please rephrase.

The second sentence is rather long and complex and might benefit from breaking up.

Especially the last bit is hard to comprehend: and to ensure that the pandemic proceeds slowly so that we can avoid surpassing the number of infections required to get past the peak