Open kwhudson opened 8 years ago
I have to go through the paper again this afternoon, but I do agree with Kevin that the specific sentence sounds a little bit unnatural. Kevin's revision sounds better.
I concur with Kevan (and Erico too, of course).
I've read through the provided proofs quite closely 3 times now, and I haven't found any typographical errors.
I have one possible suggestion for a slight change in wording -
On page 2, in the 2nd paragraph of the page, it currently reads
I keep getting hung up on "higher levels of inequality locally." I suggest maybe changing it to "higher levels of local inequality."
Just a thought.