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UXDI15 Rachel Morin- Draft Brand Statement #130

Closed rmorin528 closed 6 years ago

rmorin528 commented 6 years ago

Rachel is a fearless artist and global thinker eager to understand people and solve problems.

allysonaustin commented 6 years ago

Thanks for submitting!

Speak in first person. It comes across more confident and flows better on a resume/profile to talk as yourself, not about yourself.

I love the say your statement starts, but it loses momentum on the second half, and because it’s so brief it ends up falling flat really quickly. Combat this by more specifically describing the problems you solve, how you endeavor to understand people, and what is the ends or effects of these actions. End on as strong as note as the one that you started with!

Great work! Let me know if you have questions. A