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UXDI 15 Linkedin and Resume Kristen Etzel #146

Closed ketzel17 closed 6 years ago

ketzel17 commented 6 years ago

https://www.linkedin.com/in/kristen-etzel-3744912a/

Etzel Resume 2018v2.pdf

allysonaustin commented 6 years ago

Thanks for submitting! In future, please double check the link for submission. This is not where homework should be submitted, and I will no longer be checking this repo.

I have just two comments for you.

  1. I encourage you to put your UXDI projects as separate bullet points. They get a little lost as a paragraph, and it's more difficult to scan through quickly.

  2. Your first sentence of your brand statement is a run-on sentence and doesn't quite make sense. Read it out loud and finesse the wording so that the sentence is complete.

Great work! Let me know if you have questions. A