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Digital Accessibility Toolkit - Boîte à outils d'accessibilité numérique
https://a11y.canada.ca/en/
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[CHANGE] Digital Accessibility Toolkit Description #418

Closed lynelal closed 9 months ago

lynelal commented 9 months ago

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https://deploy-preview-335--a11ycanada.netlify.app/en/

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This is a recommendation. Please have the content author review the change and approve it prior to editing.

Why make the change: Plain language • Having both ‘learning materials’ and ‘learn’ in same sentence is redundant • Sentence is too long • ‘implement accessibility in your digital project’ is awkward and confusing phrasing • Implement is a long word

Change text from ‘We offer a variety of learning materials and resources to help you learn and implement accessibility in your digital projects.’ To ‘We offer a variety of learning materials and resources to help you deliver accessible digital projects.’

French: From: 'Nous offrons une variété de matériel d'apprentissage et de ressources pour vous aider à apprendre et à mettre en œuvre l'accessibilité dans vos projets numériques.' To: 'Nous offrons une variété de matériel d'apprentissage et de ressources pour vous aider à réaliser des projets numériques accessibles.'

Digital Accessibility Toolkit description
shawnthompson commented 9 months ago

@JulieBB23 thoughts about this change?

JulieBB23 commented 9 months ago

All good, please go ahead with the changes. Thanks @lynelal

lynelal commented 9 months ago

@JulieBB23 You're welcome.

shawnthompson commented 9 months ago

Over to you @DhruvPatel2502. Please make this change.

JulieBB23 commented 9 months ago

description has been done.