[CHANGE] Accessibility Fundamentals descriptions

lynelal commented 9 months ago

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This is a recommendation. Please have the content author review the change and approve it prior to editing.

Why make the change: Plain language • Long and awkward sentence. • As a rule, any sentence with 'that' needs to be re-written. • Difficult to understand. • Avoid sentences that need a comma (e.g. before "while").

Change text from ‘Discover the accessibility principles behind creating digital products and services that remove barriers for people living with disabilities while ensuring ease of use for all.’ Flesch-Kincaid 19.2 To ‘Discover the principles behind accessible digital products and services. These principles remove barriers for people living with disabilities and ensures ease of use for all.’ Flesh-Kincaid 12.9

French: From: 'Découvrez les principes d'accessibilité qui guident la création de produits et de services numériques qui éliminent les obstacles pour les personnes handicapées tout en assurant une facilité d'utilisation pour tous.' Flesch-Kincaid 19.8 To: 'Découvrez les principes qui guident l'accessibilité des produits et services numériques. Ces principes éliminent les obstacles pour les personnes en situation de handicap et facilitent l’utilisation pour tous.' Flesh-Kincaid 12.7

shawnthompson commented 9 months ago

@JulieBB23 thoughts on this change?

JulieBB23 commented 9 months ago

All good please go ahead. Thanks @lynelal

shawnthompson commented 9 months ago

Changes made:

lynelal commented 9 months ago

@shawnthompson Thank you so much. Looks great!

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