getroadmap / roadmap-site

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/ppmroadmap/ - copy edits & cut-off screenshot #40

Closed bkingbking closed 9 years ago

bkingbking commented 9 years ago

Need to make the following changes:

Old:

Your Roadmap to successful projects See your project through its twists and turns to success. Visualize, align, forecast and manage one project or an entire campaign, all integrated with Basecamp.

New:

Multiple projects, multiple apps, one view Connect goals with resource capacity realities, compare planned vs. actual, load balance at-risk projects, and make custom reports -- across multiple apps to provide end-to-end visibility. Don't change how you drive, ditch the spreadsheet instead!

[maybe start A/B testing to see if the platform angle resonates]

Gantt chart screenshot is cut-off

The current home page shows 2 project bars, /integrations/github shows 2 project bars, but the new new home page (below) only shows 1 project bar. Need to show at least 2 full bars to be visually meaningful.

screen shot 2015-10-18 at 1 47 46 pm

Copy edits - new blue panel

Old:

Work where you work Let your team members work where they work best. Use Roadmap to plan, analyze and do projects across online tools. Roadmap integrates with Github, Basecamp, and Jira, giving you a unified look into the activity of your projects and people.

New:

Work where you work Let your team members work where they work best. Roadmap's browser extension creates a seamless experience. Efficiently manage dates, estimates, and track time from within GitHub, Basecamp and JIRA. Forecasting and tracking time is hard enough without having to toggle between apps!