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Remove pronoun I from voice for lack of lone addressor #57

Closed randomecho closed 11 years ago

randomecho commented 11 years ago

There is no single author listed, the credits are to the GitHub team, so this should match up narration to fit that angle.

The biggest loss was probably for the intro sentence on branching.

matthewmccullough commented 11 years ago

Nice tuning. It actually tightens up the wording quite a bit. :wrench: