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Feedback on copy from @stephbwills/@yourfrienderin #35

Closed nayafia closed 7 years ago

nayafia commented 7 years ago

Hey y'all, apologies for weird format but figured this was the best way to do it.

@stephbwills @yourfrienderin We did a first pass at copy on https://open-source-friday.githubapp.com/. Can you review?

Comments on here are fine, or you can start a PR.

NOTE:

(For others following along: meet @stephbwills, who does brand editorial, and @yourfrienderin, who does business marketing, at GitHub! I've asked them to provide feedback as they're both editorial super-:star:s.)

nayafia commented 7 years ago

A few qs for @yourfrienderin (as I think the company page needs the most :heart:):

stephbwills commented 7 years ago

Hi! I added some suggestions in this google doc: https://docs.google.com/a/github.com/document/d/14zPDhTTm27HA7vbeNzB4FuCCchckIRiCZXA8r3oAqaM/edit?usp=sharing

Not ideal, but I hope it's an OK way to give you feedback?

nayafia commented 7 years ago

@stephbwills thank you! GDoc is fine. Could you also take a look at the other two pages?

(They're both equally light on copy, so hopefully it's not too much to ask :innocent:)

stephbwills commented 7 years ago

More edits right here! https://docs.google.com/a/github.com/document/d/1OtFqlBIimtRv63XxZ0_HhZD6s9doc8Vt_0I1au6UH4U/edit?usp=sharing

For some reason, suggestions only worked for, like, half of the doc. I highlighted my changes in green. I think the Maintainer copy needed the most work. There was a lot of repetition in the language. I didn't make a note of it, but that's what most of my changes were attempting to fix. If you don't feel like accepting a change, that's fine! Just watch out to make sure you're not using "time" or "project" too frequently!

nayafia commented 7 years ago

@stephbwills thank you so much, this is super helpful! I'll start a PR for changes.

yourfrienderin commented 7 years ago

I made comments directly in @stephbwills 's doc. Hopping on a ✈️ but hopefully all makes sense?

nayafia commented 7 years ago

Closed, tracking here: https://github.com/ossfriday/ossfriday/pull/41