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The code for the official Godot Engine website. A static site built using Jekyll.
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Add Parallax2D progress report post #823

Closed markdibarry closed 3 months ago

markdibarry commented 4 months ago

Feel free to proofread or call out anything you see that should be changed.

markdibarry commented 4 months ago

@JohnVeness I removed the informal tone, the references to my personal project, and unnecessary examples. Sorry again and let me know if there's any grammar mistakes. Thanks again for the feedback!

JohnVeness commented 4 months ago

@JohnVeness I removed the informal tone, the references to my personal project, and unnecessary examples. Sorry again and let me know if there's any grammar mistakes. Thanks again for the feedback!

I think the grammar is (mostly) fine, but I think it's a shame to lose some of the videos. In particular, scroll.mp4 was good near the top of the article, and zoom_out.mp4 was helpful too.

markdibarry commented 4 months ago

Gotcha! I added those two examples back and made the requested changes. Let me know if you see anything else!

markdibarry commented 4 months ago

Looks like there was some more confusion on my part! Sorry again! After some clarification, it looks like I am supposed to be the author of the blog post after all. I've added some of the original tone back, but scaled back a lot of the post since it was found to be hard to follow. I updated the zooming video to be easier to follow. I also removed the references to songs by Del Amitri, but I'm putting my foot down on the word "bogus". :joy:

It's getting late my time but I'll do another look over tomorrow morning!

coppolaemilio commented 3 months ago

We can get this one ready for tomorrow! I'll review it today and see what's missing 👍

coppolaemilio commented 3 months ago

Thanks and congrats on surviving the process of getting the blog post released @markdibarry 🥳

MurderVeggie commented 3 months ago

Seconding this, would love to see more from you in the future!