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good-labs / greater-good-affirmation

An affirmation that your open source community exists for the greater good.
https://good-labs.github.io/greater-good-affirmation/
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remove redundant tagline #15

Closed pdurbin closed 5 years ago

pdurbin commented 5 years ago

I find the tagline marked in blue below redundant:

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vsoch commented 5 years ago

Hmm, well I like it. That phrase you came up with is powerful, and I'd like to keep it.

pdurbin commented 5 years ago

Ok. To me "The Greater Good Pledge for the greater good" sounds odd but whatever. 😄 Closing. 😄

vsoch commented 5 years ago

Nah I'd like to take a look at this tomorrow, it's a good suggestion.

vsoch commented 5 years ago

hey @pdurbin I gave this another look, and I think the redundancy is okay, and actually might be good to better solidify "for the greater good" not only as an affirmation, but for the Good Labs. I'm going to close the issue, if there are further things to discuss please comment.

pdurbin commented 5 years ago

I still think "The Greater Good Affirmation for the greater good" reads funny. It's just a difference of opinion. Here's how it looks right now (redundancy highlighted in blue):

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I think changing "Maintained by Good Labs" to something like "Maintained by Good Labs, for the greater good" sounds fine. No objection to that.