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[CLOSED] Second sentence in introductory paragraph is strange #278

Closed PaulKinlan closed 10 years ago

PaulKinlan commented 10 years ago

Issue by Meggin Tuesday Apr 29, 2014 at 19:27 GMT # Sample: Friday Sep 13, 2013 at 22:58 GMT Originally opened as https://github.com/PaulKinlan/WebDocs/issues/130

Suggested rewrite:

This guide shows you how to quickly plan and build your first multi-screen site.

PaulKinlan commented 10 years ago

Comment by Meggin Tuesday Apr 29, 2014 at 19:28 GMT # Sample: Friday Sep 13, 2013 at 22:58 GMT

Actually, the next paragraph starts off with 'In this tutorial'. So here's another suggested rewrite:

Learn how to quickly plan and build your first multi-screen site.

PaulKinlan commented 10 years ago

Comment by PaulKinlan Tuesday Apr 29, 2014 at 20:05 GMT # Sample: Friday Sep 13, 2013 at 22:58 GMT

@Meggin I thought we were killing this paragraph in a later bug.

PaulKinlan commented 10 years ago

Comment by Meggin Tuesday Apr 29, 2014 at 20:17 GMT # Sample: Friday Sep 13, 2013 at 22:58 GMT

We are-- just didn't close this yet (came to this conclusion later).

Having a quick bite to eat and back to desk.

Killing it though before I walk back.

On Tue, Apr 29, 2014 at 1:05 PM, Paul Kinlan notifications@github.comwrote:

@Meggin https://github.com/Meggin I thought we were killing this paragraph in a later bug.

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