Closed nik0lai closed 6 years ago
gorkang
commented
6 years ago Te parece mejor esta version?
The doctor offers her a follow-up test [[(biopsy of the breast) / (amniocentesis)]], necessary to confirm the diagnosis. During the procedure, a needle is inserted to take a sample of [[the breast cyst / the amniotic sac (were the fetus develops)]].
nik0lai
commented
6 years ago Me suena raro
The doctor offers her a follow-up test biopsy of the breast, necessary to confirm the diagnosis.
The doctor offers her a follow-up test amniocentesis, necessary to confirm the diagnosis.
Agregaría that "that consists in an/a" a ambos. Igual quedó con la corrección que hiciste así que si prefieres esperar a que lo revise miro u otra persona sólo hay que cerrar el issue.
gorkang
commented
6 years ago La version que indique antes incluia parentesis:
The doctor offers her a follow-up test (biopsy of the breast), necessary to confirm the diagnosis.
The doctor offers her a follow-up test (amniocentesis), necessary to confirm the diagnosis.
No crees que queda razonablemente bien asi?
nik0lai
commented
6 years ago Se me habían pasado los paréntesis. Así queda bien. Implementé los cambios así que cierro este issue.
En el follow-up tenemos este párrafo:
The doctor offers her a follow-up test [[that consist of a biopsy/called amniocentesis]], necessary to confirm the diagnosis. During the procedure, a needle is inserted to take a sample of [[the breast cyst/the amniotic sac]].Algunos cambios que me parecen pertinentes. Cambiar "a biopsy" por "a breast biopsy" para homogeneizar con lo que decimos en la escala severity-emotion. Cambiaría amniotic sac porque me parece muy complejo, tuve que buscar que era. Dejaría el párrafo así:
The doctor offers her a follow-up test [[that consist of a breast biopsy/called amniocentesis]], necessary to confirm the diagnosis. During the procedure, a needle is inserted to take a sample of [[the breast cyst/the sac were the fetus develops (amniotic sac)]].