The whitepaper text has a notable amount of errors, ranging from typos, punctuation, gramatic and uncommon language use.
For instance in the first page, section background,
Bitcoin[1] was created as an “online cash” - asecure but relatively slow [...]
The word asecure there, I'm mostly sure it's a typo, and one that could easly be caught with most contemporary text processors with an english dictionary setup.
I don't think it's productive to list all errors I found here. I brought this up so we can come with a way to improve this whitepaper, to make it look professional. Even better if it is flawless at some point.
My suggestion is to make available a version of the whitepaper in plain text, and maybe use markdown to make it a little easier to read and navigate. The purpose of having a plain text version is that the whole community could make contributions. Specially finding and correcting little mistakes is easier with more people.
The whitepaper text has a notable amount of errors, ranging from typos, punctuation, gramatic and uncommon language use. For instance in the first page, section background,
The word asecure there, I'm mostly sure it's a typo, and one that could easly be caught with most contemporary text processors with an english dictionary setup.
I don't think it's productive to list all errors I found here. I brought this up so we can come with a way to improve this whitepaper, to make it look professional. Even better if it is flawless at some point.
My suggestion is to make available a version of the whitepaper in plain text, and maybe use markdown to make it a little easier to read and navigate. The purpose of having a plain text version is that the whole community could make contributions. Specially finding and correcting little mistakes is easier with more people.
Hope we can make it better together.