Closed zietzm closed 5 years ago
I agree that the sentences you suggest removing do not help the conclusion.
You might try re-arranging things this way to see if you like it.
This sounds like a good idea. I'll try moving the sentences around and maybe it'll read a bit easier.
I agree that the sentences you suggest removing do not help the conclusion.
This sounds like a good idea. I'll try moving the sentences around and maybe it'll read a bit easier.