I tried to bring the point that, "Performance attributable to factors other than degree is often only a small portion of overall performance," to a more prominent position.
Do these revisions make the abstract too results-first? I'm still not certain that line 9 belongs in the abstract, as important of a point as I think it is.
I tried to bring the point that, "Performance attributable to factors other than degree is often only a small portion of overall performance," to a more prominent position.
Do these revisions make the abstract too results-first? I'm still not certain that line 9 belongs in the abstract, as important of a point as I think it is.