I got as far as the --chomp section and thought I would stop and get your feedback. Is this good?
The changes are all small except for "bypass" which has a confusing meaning. I chose "act on" and "actioning" instead of "bypass" and "bypassing". What do you think? There might be other choices.
I got as far as the
--chomp
section and thought I would stop and get your feedback. Is this good?The changes are all small except for "bypass" which has a confusing meaning. I chose "act on" and "actioning" instead of "bypass" and "bypassing". What do you think? There might be other choices.