Closed Paraknight closed 4 years ago
I changed the structure of the first sentence. I also changed some of the grammar to try to make it flow better. However, with the structure change, the word choice may still need to be adjusted.
I Agree that the text flows better with your changes. Merging!
I changed the structure of the first sentence. I also changed some of the grammar to try to make it flow better. However, with the structure change, the word choice may still need to be adjusted.