Hi @CraigRe ,
A couple of further minor things I came across:
Section 10.1.1: "Declarations within XML Schema Definition language (XSD) link a named element to a define data structure." ==> defined data structure
Same section: "XML Schema Definition language (XSD) can define that some specific string values should be cast to (interpreted as) other data types, such as specific XSD data types for dates, date+time timestamps etc." ==> remove "language"
Section 12.1: "which we deemed easier to read than JSON. " ==> "we" is an unusual wording in the standard. Suggest to slightly rephrase this.
Section 12.2: add closing bracket to "(as is the case with SOAP Web services. "
Section 12.2: "A new endpoint exposes EPCIS events types and individual events" ==> event instead of events
Section 12.2: " and linked from the the EPCIS landing page at https://www.gs1.org/epcis " ==> remove superfl. "the"
Hi @CraigRe , A couple of further minor things I came across: