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Evolution Physical Therapy Site
https://www.evolutionptstudio.com
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grammar updates #14

Open gsantella opened 2 years ago

gsantella commented 2 years ago

All through the home page "physical therapy" is both capitalized and not capitalized. If I remember correctly, it doesn't need to be capitalized at all unless it's part of the actual business title.(red circles) And at the blue underline, the sentence doesn't sound right to me. I could be wrong about that though.

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medsteele commented 2 years ago

I noticed the same things as well and think physical therapy, when not in a name, should be lowercase. the blue sentence I think just needs a "get" between "help" and "others".

medsteele commented 2 years ago

the about page needs a little revision as well imo. again physical therapy capitalized where it doesn't need to be, and in general the bios could use a little touching up. might be nitpicking on my part, though.