gzc5211 / Hilaire-Belloc-1-Cautionary-Tales-for-Children

https://gzc5211.github.io/Hilaire-Belloc-1-Cautionary-Tales-for-Children/
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Open tylerakam opened 1 year ago

tylerakam commented 1 year ago

I really liked how the site looked. The integration of images on the poems page worked really well and it felt like it actually connected the pieces together to tell the story. One thing I would change about the layout, though, would be, maybe link back up to the top after every entry. That way, users can jump around to what they're interested in more. Overall, I thought it was really well put together and easy to use!

JaxAbele commented 1 year ago

This project is well done! the way the contents of the poem page are set up is very thorough. I really like the inclusion of showing certain key words that are associated with different characters of the poems. One thing i noticed is that at the top of your poems page that has the table and all of the content there is no navigation bar at the top that could take you back to other parts of the site. Other than that awesome job!

Yuying-Jin commented 1 year ago

I like the style of the website, which is simple and clear. It is very comfortable to read the story. You guys markup some interesting types of keywords, such as person, action, place, and animal. You also output a table to list various keywords. Nice job! I find on Poem page, there is one image not shown, because the name of the image is CTC-41.png instead of CTC-41.jpg.png. About page only shows one paragraph but includes much informatoin. Perhaps you can use unordered list to list the information, so that this page can be more reader-friendly.

arrowarchive commented 1 year ago

I like the concept of this project and I appreciate how the copyright information was handled, but there are some aspects that need ironing out. The navbar disappears completely for the book link and poem pages, and the "about page" needs to have larger font, greater spacing, or something else to fill space, as the page feels empty compared to the others.

Aside from those, this project is coming along nicely. I believe this project will improve with time, and I believe it will be even better if this repo is used for a future project so a navbar can be added to the books and poems, maybe one that scrolls with the page, that will help people find a specific book or poem they are looking for. I see potential here, so hopefully you all continue to improve this project!

luh429 commented 1 year ago

I really enjoyed looking at your site. I thought it was very organized and the illustrations made it fun! On thing I would recommend is having your nav bar appear at the top of the "Book Link" and "Poems" page just so it is easier to navigate between the two pages. All together really great work!

epp5198 commented 1 year ago

I really like the set up of this website and how the project came out. The website is easy to navigate to the first desired destination but it is a little more difficult without a nav bar on the other pages to help navigate through the rest of the website. Overall the project looks great.

tec5271 commented 1 year ago

I like the clean aesthetic of this website. It makes navigating and reading easy for a web surfer. Adding a nav bar to all the pages would make it even better to navigate back and forth through the pages. The structure of the poems page is clean as well. I like where this project is heading.

jbg5721 commented 1 year ago

Hey, Your project looks great so far, with a clean look all around. A few things I would suggest are adding a nav bar to each page, so you can easily go back and forth. Another thing is the link on the about page, it blends too much with the background color and I can't really read it. Lastly I notice that when on the about page the nav bar is highlighting the home page button, This may of been intended though.

gak5275 commented 1 year ago

I think your site looks great overall, and you did a good job outputting the poems on the website. There are two things that I would add: The poems page is missing a nav bar, and while there are links to each poem from the table of contents, the poem titles in the body do not link back to the top of the page.

julianjmg commented 1 year ago

I really like the simplicity of the website. But, I find that the layout of certain pages are a bit awkward. For example the about page is very crammed at the top and the home page feels very empty. Also I'm sure youre aware by now, but there is no nav bar on your poems page. Nice work so far!

gvt5036 commented 1 year ago

I really like the way you included the pictures in the books and poems, it is very charming. However, I did notice that in some pages, the page layout feels uncomfortable at times. For example, the "About Us" page feels very claustrophobic, like all the text is just jammed together in one space with no breathing room. I also noticed there is no Nav Bar in the Poems page which is a bit problematic. Overall though the site works and it looks nice!

JiayuanWen commented 1 year ago

While the site is not entirely finished, I can see the style you guys are going for, and I'm looking forward to the finished site.

I do like the ToC having people, actions, and animals mentioned in each chapter, which is a lot more advanced than what my team has done so far.

Suggestions I would make so far:

JiminyKricket0323 commented 1 year ago

While I was exploring around their project website, I've noticed that It's not completely done. Even though it's not done yet, I could seek through all the small details that project members were trying to put effort into. Especially a little GitHub button on the bottom on the home page which directly opens up their own GitHub page was something I found very cool and helpful. Also organising all the pictures and contents was very well done. Great work guys!!

Couple of things that I would like to suggest knowing that it's not completed is possibly you could change the font colour and the size on Poem content page. Loved the blue and white colour for each row, however I found it's visually not easy to read when the text was in white colour.

ZakMurphy191 commented 1 year ago

Guys this website is beautiful, you did a really good job on it! There are a couple of problems that I would fix and these problems are easy fixes.

  1. Nav bars on all pages to sift through the site better
  2. The spacing is too much That's all I have otherwise it looks very professional and I applaud you for the hard work your team put in for this site!