Improve content on About Us page

emmathrash commented 7 months ago

Overview

The About Us Page needs a content update to make sure it follows the new voice and tone guidelines. There also needs to be a collaboration established with research to make sure any legal information or descriptions of the process are accurate and specific to CA.

Action Items

[x] Check off tasks as they are completed
[x] Link all resources and write updates in the resource/note section below
[x] Update any content about expungement, record clearance and facts to be accurate and specific to CA
[x] Update content on the rest of the page under new V&T guidelines
[ ] Present to content team for feedback
[ ] Feedback session with UXR
[ ] Iterate
[ ] Hand off to design team

Resources/Notes

The About Us page has already been worked on for issues #965 and #902
MAIN: #1365 working in this figma page https://www.figma.com/design/hYqRxmBVtJbDv9DJXV6nra/Expunge-Assist-Main-Figma?node-id=2-45

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anitadesigns commented 1 month ago

UXD issue is #1366 where I left comment : Onwubu worked on this issue for a bit and reformatted the layout. @jyehllow and I will review it to ensure it is consistent with the rest of the website's design. We will then hand it over to Dev.

Content shared that they made quick fixes to the copy for now and then will return to it at a later time

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SamHyler commented 3 weeks ago

Quick fixes were not added, so I went back through to check where they were and have added them to the design updates. Cheryl wrote this copy as the solution previously, and have now added it into the new redesign:

Why expungement matters -1 in 3 people in America have a criminal record. -Black people are disproportionally convicted of low-level, nonviolent crimes. -In California, 227,650 marijuana convictions were eligible for record clearance (expungement). 94% of those convictions were cleared between 2019 and 2023. Source: Department of Justice.

Will loop in UXR to check any accuracies Changed record clearance to expungement in header

SamHyler commented 3 weeks ago

@raeraeicky @sylvia-nam

Above is the finalized text for the about page section "Why expungement matters." Wanted to loop in UXR for a check. Is there anything legally inaccurate? Is there anything that can can be construed as legal advice?

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SamHyler commented 3 weeks ago

The Partner with us section also had changes, namely these to the body text (have been added to the design frames):

We are seeking partnerships with clinics and organizations focused on criminal-justice reform. Partnership means, in part, that Expunge Assist would tailor this product to the needs of your organization and clients, free of charge. 

Contact us to learn more.

sylvia-nam commented 2 weeks ago

@SamHyler I made comments and have a proposed revision is in this doc. I ran the document by @raeraeicky @saraisabelcf during our research meeting today, and they okayed it.

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