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IETF Optical YANG models in ACTN Architecture
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Issues in Shepherd writeup #138

Closed italobusi closed 9 months ago

italobusi commented 1 year ago

Although my previous comments are mostly addressed, one issue does remain. Both documents use Normative and Informative references to non-IETF documents, specifically:

[ANSI_T1.105], [IEEE_754], IEEE_802.3], [ITU-T_G.7044], [ITU-T_G.709], [MEF63] and [ITU-T_G.Sup43]

However, the documents are publically available via an Internet search, so it might be better for the authors to include URLs in the document reference details. Since a Routing Area Directorate member is reviewing both documents, the URL issue might be addressed in a new version after completing the Directorate review.

See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/7TIh3iRVIT9ZZd4v9yEVrM1urEo/

italobusi commented 1 year ago

Addressed in draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17 and in draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16

italobusi commented 9 months ago

Confirmed with Daniel that the comment has been resolved