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IETF Optical YANG models in ACTN Architecture
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Tom Petch IETF LC comments for draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16 #145

Closed italobusi closed 8 months ago

italobusi commented 11 months ago

ISO/IEC C99 is in the I-D but not the I-D References

IEEE Std 754-2008: is in the I-D but the references have -2019; this topic is fraught - it may be that the older one is wanted here

ANSI T1.105-1995: is in the I-D but the references have 2001

p.5 'section Section'

p.7 several should that might be SHOULD

YANG module

description /Layer 1 types/ Layer 1 YANG types/ or perhaps A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types

bandwidth scientific notation is the canonical form lower case?

I like to view the Normative References but think that here I cannot because they are subscription only. This issue came up before but I cannot remember what the conclusion was and things may have moved on since then.

ANSI I have never been able to access - subscription only I think.

ITU-T I have had problems with in the past but I now seem to have access (but they could do with lessons from the datatracker about searching = I really do not want 11587 hits for G.709!)

IEEE I used to be able to access but now struggle - the website has moved and been 'improved'. The URL in the HTML version of the I-D work but tell me that I do not have access. 802,3 I have previously downloaded and printed but seemingly no more. Online viewing such a large document I find time consuming.

See:

danielkinguk commented 8 months ago

Addressed.

italobusi commented 8 months ago

Comments addressed: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/_XUbTnGebQ2GyabCEgQTqVmEHOA/