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IETF Optical YANG models in ACTN Architecture
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Robert Wilton's Yes on draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-25: (with COMMENT) #169

Open italobusi opened 8 months ago

italobusi commented 8 months ago

(1) p 2, sec 1. Introduction

The primary focus of this document is to describe L1CSM YANG model required for the instantiation of point-to-point L1 connectivity services, to provide Layer 1 connectivity between two or more customer sites where the customer has some control over the establishment and type of the connectivity. The L1CSM specified in this document supports the point-to-point connectivity services defined in [RFC4847].

I'm struggling to parse the first sentence in paragraph above. Perhaps the following is clearer?

The primary focus of this document is to describe the L1CSM YANG model that is used for the instantiation of point-to-point L1 connectivity services, which provide Layer 1 connectivity between two or more customer sites where the customer has some control over the establishment and type of the connectivity.

It also wasn't really clear to me how the YANG model relates to the 3 different abstract services models that you described. Is it possible for the relationship to be a bit more clearly explained please.

See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/wV9hZj9g4YHRKWYeGEYIqrWDdMs/