The YANG data model in this document conforms to the Network
Management Datastore Architecture defined in [RFC8342].
Resolution: Ok for section 1. No need to add in the Abstract as per RFC8407. Remove the duplicated sentence in section 3.1
[x] Section 2
REPLACE
1.1 Terminology and Notations
Some of the key terms used in this document are listed as follow:
TS: Tributary Slot.
TSG: Tributary Slot Granularity.
TPN: Tributary Port Number.
Refer to [RFC7062] for the key terms used in this document.
The following terms are defined in [RFC7950] and are not redefined
here:
client
server
augment
data model
data node
The following terms are defined in [RFC6241] and are not redefined
here:
configuration data
state data
The terminology for describing YANG data models is found in
[RFC7950].
1.2. Tree Diagram
A simplified graphical representation of the data model is used in
Section 3 of this document. The meaning of the symbols in these
diagrams is defined in [RFC8340].
1.3. Prefix in Data Node Names
In this document, names of data nodes and other data model objects
are prefixed using the standard prefix associated with the
corresponding YANG imported modules, as shown in the following table.
RFC Editor Note: Please replace XXXX with the number assigned to
the RFC once this draft becomes an RFC. Please replace YYYY with the
RFC numbers assigned to [I-D.ietf-ccamp-layer1-types].
Resolution: Ok
[x] Section 3
Renumber section 3 as section 2 and section 3.5 as section 3
Resolution: Ok
[x] Section 5
ADD
RFC Editor Note: Please replace XXXX with the number assigned to
the RFC once this draft becomes an RFC.
I have reviewed draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-13 and found few editorial comments:
[x] Abstract and Section 1
ADD
Resolution: Ok for section 1. No need to add in the Abstract as per RFC8407. Remove the duplicated sentence in section 3.1
[x] Section 2
REPLACE
Resolution: Ok
[x] Section 3
Renumber section 3 as section 2 and section 3.5 as section 3
Resolution: Ok
[x] Section 5
ADD
Resolution: Ok