refine report end setence

[noamoss]

fixes #228

[akariv]

אולי במקום ״יש לנו את כל הדיווח של״, פשוט ״שלחנו את הדיווח של״

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[noamoss]

מעולה. מתקן עוד רגע

[noamoss]

following Mushon's suggestion:

[akariv]

The double question doesn't sound right. Plus, what's the big difference between "סיימנו עם הדיווח של" and "השלמנו את הדיווח היומי עבור" besides using fancier words?

On Sun, May 3, 2020 at 8:56 PM noamoss notifications@github.com wrote:

following Mushon's suggestion:

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[noamoss]

The double question doesn't sound right.

I pretty liked it actually, makes it sound more encouring. @mushon ?

Plus, what's the big difference between "סיימנו עם הדיווח של" and "השלמנו

it does not sound like as final end, like before.

[mushon]

I agree. We don’t need the double question. “השלמנו את הדיווח עבור” - works even if it’s not for the one reporting. Unlike “הדיווח של”