Closed ShredzAlot closed 2 years ago
Fixed the majority of these, they will be included in our next update. I've fixed all the spelling, most egregious grammar, and incorrect number formatting issues. I have left in some of the odd sentence wording that you've pointed out, as we try not to make any creative changes wherever possible. Use of "solar wind" and the use of "terrestrial" as a noun I have left in as that appears to be intentional by BioWare, even if it goes against the norm.
-"Earth" should be Earths
Earth's
Renshato could do with an update.
Looks like the word "in" should be between "sulphur", and "its".
I've highlighted the spots that need (maybe) fixing (highlight colors are all random. I wrote which color is for what if there are more then one present on each planet). UPDATES will be on the bottom of the list.
:UPDATES:
There is probably more I've missed but its a start