A Large Collection of Typos, Misspelling and Other Questionable Phrases of Planets Descriptions

[ShredzAlot]

I've highlighted the spots that need (maybe) fixing (highlight colors are all random. I wrote which color is for what if there are more then one present on each planet). UPDATES will be on the bottom of the list.

-Should just say "deposit"

-Needs a space in-between

-Has one space two many (purple) -Celsius is spelt wrong (orange)

-Should say "pirates"

-"but" should be removed

-Celsius is spelt wrong again

-Should either say "Chasca is "in" very early development" or "Chasca is very early "in" development"

-"gravity" needs to be capitalized

-"Earth" should be Earths

-Needs a comma

-Sentence should say "It has an unusually large amount" (yellow) -Should be (probably) solar winds. (purple)

-Missing "the" or needs to be Chasca's

-One space too many (yellow) -Leviathan spelt wrong (pink) -"Day Length" is missing ":" after it (not highlighted)

-"Iron" shouldn't be capitalized

-These ones are a maybe but I'm not to sure (red) -Is solar wind correct or does it need to be solar winds (also red)

-The "?" needs to be a ":"

-Missing a period at the end

-"World" or "Planet" needs to be added in the sentence

-This ones a nitpick but "soldier" should be replaced with "admiral" (yellow) -surface "of" Pressha's (purple)

-Needs a ":"

-Needs a ":"

-Missing the G at the end of the number

-One space too many

-Remove the word "by" and replace with the sentence "to be read on the surface"

-"If" should be "but" (red) -Missing the ":" (green)

-Missing the "G" at the end

-Probably should be surveyors instead of surveys (yellow) -add "of" (purple)

-"drive "core" discharge" (purple) -Theshaca's is spelt wrong (yellow) -Terminus "Systems" (green)

-Should be "auctions" (red) -Sentence should be reworded to say "The abandoned base is now completely empty." (purple)

-Reword the sentence to "terrestrial planet of lifeless rock quite similar to Luna." or something different

-Needs the ":"

-Should be "solar winds" I think (green) -Sentence should be rewritten to "Though investigations have attributed"

-Either "move" needs to be deleted or the sentence reworded

:UPDATES:

-Sulphur is spelt wrong

-Either add "to" in-between the highlighted spot or just before the word almost (yellow) -night should be nights and meets should be meet (red)

There is probably more I've missed but its a start

[henbagle]

Fixed the majority of these, they will be included in our next update. I've fixed all the spelling, most egregious grammar, and incorrect number formatting issues. I have left in some of the odd sentence wording that you've pointed out, as we try not to make any creative changes wherever possible. Use of "solar wind" and the use of "terrestrial" as a noun I have left in as that appears to be intentional by BioWare, even if it goes against the norm.

[sialivi]

-"Earth" should be Earths

Earth's

[Mike7099]

Renshato could do with an update.

Looks like the word "in" should be between "sulphur", and "its".