Another Large Collection of Planet/Surfaces/Journal Misspellings, Weird Descriptions, Etc

[ShredzAlot]

Planets

• Remove Small (and its comma) and capitalize distant or reword the sentence as "Alsages is a small distant terrestrial"

• Should be 11,190 km

• Missing the G

• Should be 21,481 km

• Should probably be changed to "the planet" instead but this ones optional (Yellow)
• to "the" extremes (Red)

• One space two many

• Remove gas

• "gravity" needs to be capitalized

• One space two many

• One space two many

• Missing the ":"

• Not actually sure about this one

• Should be "surprisingly"

• One space two many

• Should be 71,541 km

• Pretty sure it should be Gorgon not Wuo

Planet Surfaces

Antibaar

• Is Shepard searching inside the ruins or outside them. This never made sense to me and I don't know if its just stupid writing

Metgos

• Should be called Turian Wreckage not corpse

Nempos

• Should probably say something to the extent of "This safebox has a League of One medallion in it. Whether it was buried here by a miner that found it while digging is beyond me." Or something like that.

Tuntau

• It's really up to you which one should be changed.

UPDATE: Solcrum

• I didn't know this place was a dig site. There's nothing around to indicate it ever was. Maybe just changing the last sentence to "Wherever it was found is unclear." Location is in that elevated crater.

Journal

• Should probably be "agents" (actual quotations in the sentence). I don't think this is a typo but it just looked funny

  

• Needs an "a" in between

• Remove one of the systems

• "colony" needs to be capitalized. plus actually replacing "Colony" with the word "Facility".

• Should be reworded to say you need to take out 2 more bases cause thats how many more you need to take out after the first one is destroyed.

  

• Needs a mission completion description added. Maybe something like "Listening Post Alpha has been saved from further rachni attacks".

UPDATE

CONVO

In one (if not the last) conversation you can have with Wrex. Not actually sure if this is intentional or even if it really matters but if not then it should be "what about the fight?" not "what bout the fight?".

[henbagle]

The clear misspellings and grammar mistakes have been fixed and will be included in the next update, including all the number and spacing issues, and the Wrex conversation thing.

The Listening Post Alpha journal appears to be a bug, as there is actually mission completion text in the quest that does not appear to be firing. I will take a look and add a solution to issue #105.

The planet surface issues are known. I will take a look but so many of them have weird wording or map issues that can be easily ignored. I've previously opted to leave a lot of them as they are unless they are particularly egregious. Fixing the text is not simple because it requires being translated into every language the game supports, it's not like a grammar or spelling mistake that is limited to English.