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2. In JINST affiliations are written in the form: Department, University, Street, City, Country Please check each affiliation and provide the missing information if needed.

我们需要提供更具体的地址信息吗？例如什么区邮政编码？

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Takara Jikin @.***> writes:

2 In JINST affiliations are written in the form: Department, University, Street, City, Country Please check each affiliation and provide the missing information if needed.

我们需要提供更具体的地址信息吗？例如什么区邮政编码？

我觉得不需要，现在的形式就够了。因为当今寄信已经不那么重要了。

[littlewu2508]

Page 2, Line 5: experiments undergoes to development -> experiments undergoes development? 感觉 undergoes to 没见过 --

[littlewu2508]

Page 5, Line 13-14: To better model the rising edge curvature than Hamilton -> To model the rising edge curvature better than Hamilton

[dachengx]

Page 2, fourth-to-last line: the proximity of them -> their proximity

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Page 3, Line 1: intercorelated -> intercorrelated

[littlewu2508]

公式 (2.7) 不严格，容易给人 \epsilon(t) 加了 N_PE 次的错觉

[dachengx]

Page 4, Line 4: extra -> the extra

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Page 5, Line 19: reasonable -> a reasonable

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Page 5, Line 19: underlying -> the underlying

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Page 5, Line 4: translate -> translates

[littlewu2508]

Page 8, section 3, line 2: from 1 to $\hat{N}_\mathrm{PE}$ and $\hat{N}_\mathrm{PE}$ is an estimator of $N_\mathrm{PE}$ in eq.~\eqref{eq:lc-sample} -> from 1 to $\hat{N}_\mathrm{PE}$, an estimator of $N_\mathrm{PE}$ in eq.~\eqref{eq:lc-sample}.

[dachengx]

Page 6, fifth-to-last line: substantial -> a substantial

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Page 8, Line 1: Resolution -> The resolution

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Page 9, Line 3: MLE like -> MLE-like

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Page 9, fourth-to-last line: remain -> remains

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Page 11, Line 5: extracts -> extracted

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Page 11, Line 9: shift -> and shift

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Page 11, Line 9: a SER -> an SER

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Page 11, sixth-to-last line: but found -> but is found

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Page 14, Line 6: an 1 dimensional -> a 1-dimensional

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Page 14, Line 7: 1 dimensional -> 1-dimensional

[dachengx]

Page 14, fourth-to-last line: one-channelled -> 1-channel

这个不是很确定

[littlewu2508]

s/convoluted/convolved/g

convoluted 是晦涩难懂的（被卷了很多次的）

[dachengx]

Page 19, Line 2: Metropolis-Hasings -> Metropolis-Hastings

[littlewu2508]

Page 9, line 6 from bottom: RSS will -> RSS would

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Page 23, Line 4: As figure -> In figure

[dachengx]

Reference 我没查出问题

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Page 2, Line 5: experiments undergoes to development -> experiments undergoes development? 感觉 undergoes to 没见过 --

应该是 to -> two

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@dachengx 确认一下 Figure 6(b) 的 LucyDDM D_w = 0.60ns 是否正确。它比 CNN 和 Fitting 都小。

[littlewu2508]

Page 14, line 8: fixed sample size $N_s$ 后面加逗号

[littlewu2508]

one

是 a 1-channeld 还是 an 1-channeled?

[Berrysoft]

one

是 a 1-channeld 还是 an 1-channeled?

a, /wan/

[littlewu2508]

Page 18, right below figure 10, "= 1, The" T lowercase

[dachengx]

@dachengx 确认一下 Figure 6(b) 的 LucyDDM D_w = 0.60ns 是否正确。它比 CNN 和 Fitting 都小。

确认没有问题

[littlewu2508]

section 3.5.3, marginalizing out q 0 and z gives a flattened model -> marginalizing out q 0 and z, we arrives at a flattened model,

[littlewu2508]

Figure 12. MCMC 应该改为 HMC

[littlewu2508]

Figure 12. MCMC 应该改为 HMC

包括 Caption

[littlewu2508]

sec 4.3 paragraph 4: In contrast to time 对比的是哪里？如果是相似的话，考虑用 “Similar to”？

[Berrysoft]

Page 19, line 3: an $z^i$ -> a $z^i$

之前这里是 s 所以用了 an

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Page 9, Line 3: MLE like -> MLE-like

这个不改了，是 MLE, like eq. xxxx

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Page 9, fourth-to-last line: remain -> remains

不改了，their RSS 是复数

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Page 11, Line 5: extracts -> extracted

这里麻烦了，前面的都用了现在时，为了保持一致，都应该改成过去时。

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Page 11, sixth-to-last line: but found -> but is found

不改了，前面有了 is.

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one-channelled

两种都可以，不改了。

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Page 14, line 8: fixed sample size Ns 后面加逗号

把 and associating 的 and 删了。

[Berrysoft]

sec 4.1, line 1: We constrain -> We constrained

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section 3.5.3, marginalizing out q 0 and z gives a flattened model -> marginalizing out q 0 and z, we arrives at a flattened model,

语法还行，不改了。

[Berrysoft]

sec 4.1, para 2:

Like CNN, they are the fastest...

改为

CNN is the fastest...

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sec 4.3 paragraph 4: In contrast to time 对比的是哪里？如果是相似的话，考虑用 “Similar to”？

time 不用 empty waveform, light intensity 用。