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hewiefreeman / GopherGameServer

:trophy: Feature packed, easy-to-use game server API for Go back-ends and Javascript clients. Tutorials and examples included!
https://hewiefreeman.github.io/GopherGameServer
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Revise README.md #1

Closed Oneoeigh closed 5 years ago

Oneoeigh commented 5 years ago

Revised readme to make it more precise, concise and understandable.

hewiefreeman commented 5 years ago

I'm no English major, but overall I agree with most of the changes. I just think a few things should be different:

..therefore client actions receiving, variables settings, messages sending and other functionalities are unproblematic.

"variables settings" should really read "variable setting", no?

In the second paragraph the starting "Besides," could be taken out IMO.

In the third paragraph:

...so users can be friend and invite one another to groups...

"be friend" can just be changed to "friend".

Otherwise, the changes are indeed more concise. Let me know what your thoughts were when making the changes mentioned above and if my assumptions on what you meant are correct.

Oneoeigh commented 5 years ago

  1. Yes you are right. "Variable settings" should be better.

  2. I prefer to have a verb here to say "be friends" but I don't know one :P But ya at least it should be "friends", not "friend". After 2nd consideration I would say "become friends" or "make friends". Either one should work here.

hewiefreeman commented 5 years ago

I prefer to have a verb here to say "be friends" but I don't know one

Befriend is indeed the verb ;) I'll be closing this now