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intro to "message" #1016

Closed reschke closed 2 years ago

reschke commented 2 years ago 
<!-- [rfced] Section 6.  Would the following sentence work better as
     an unordered list?

Current:
   A _message_ consists of control data to describe and route the
   message, a headers lookup table of key/value pairs for extending that
   control data and conveying additional information about the sender,
   message, content, or context, a potentially unbounded stream of
   content, and a trailers lookup table of key/value pairs for
   communicating information obtained while sending the content.

Perhaps:
   A _message_ consists of the following:

   *  control data to describe and route the message, 

   *  a headers lookup table of key/value pairs for extending that
      control data and conveying additional information about the 
      sender, message, content, or context, 

   *  a potentially unbounded stream of content, and 

   *  a trailers lookup table of key/value pairs for communicating 
      information obtained while sending the content.
-->
mnot commented 2 years ago

WFM

royfielding commented 2 years ago

Sure, +1.