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phrasing question - 3.1 #5

Closed harryhoch closed 6 months ago

harryhoch commented 7 months ago

"Model output is a central concept in the hubEnsembles package which generally refers to a specially formatted tabular representation of predictions produced by a modeling team".

This is a bit awkward. I assume you mean that "model output refers to a specially-formatted tabular representation...", but the closer referent in the sentence is "the hubEnsembles package"....

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"Model output, generally referring to a specially formatted tabular representation of predictions produced by a modeling team, is a central concept in the hubEnsembles effort".

Also, this paper really doesn't talk about teams much. perhaps "produced by a model"?

lshandross commented 7 months ago

Even though the paper doesn't talk much about modeling teams, I left in the reference to "teams" because they are mentioned in the case study later.

harryhoch commented 7 months ago

fine to keep it in - just might need a bit of context