fix incomplete sentence in terraform privisioning topic

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fix incomplete sentence in terraform privisioning topic #16

Open clnperez opened 3 years ago

clnperez commented 3 years ago

I'm not sure what this is supposed to mean or I'd submit a PR rather than an issue: In the IBM Cloud global network of location to host your highly available resources and service instances workload.

https://cloud.ibm.com/docs/ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform?topic=ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform-db-provisioning-eu-de

geethasathyamurthy commented 3 years ago

@clnperez/ @cnorman Thanks for letting this know. Sorry for the delay in responding. we have edited the content, request to confirm the same. https://cloud.ibm.com/docs/ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform?topic=ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform-db-provisioning-eu-de. This content will be published in couple of hours.

Thanks, Geetha

geethasathyamurthy commented 3 years ago

@clnperez

We are closing this issue, here is the update of the issue, https://cloud.ibm.com/docs/ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform?topic=ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform-db-provisioning-eu-de.

Please confirm and close this issue, if it is fixed.

Thanks, Geetha

clnperez commented 3 years ago

sorry -- i didn't see these. unfortunately, that's still not clear. I would just completely delete this paragraph:

In the IBM Cloud global network of location. To achieve the highly available resources and service instances. You are forced to create resources in multiple regions, but with the same billing and usage. To achieve the low application latency, you may deploy your resources and applications to the location that are nearest to your customers. For more information, about location, see about locations.`

That wording is mostly duplicated in the link at the end of the paragraph about locations., but is more clear there.

I'd just make these more prominent:

For more information, about location, see about locations.
For more information, about the services provided in specific region, see Services region.

geethasathyamurthy commented 3 years ago

@clnperez Thanks much for the response, here is the updated content https://cloud.ibm.com/docs/ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform?topic=ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform-db-provisioning-eu-de. , request to confirm is this fine and close the issue.

Regards, Geetha

clnperez commented 3 years ago

Suggestion: For more detailed information about services provided in specific regions and resource deployment, refer to locations for resource deployment.

geethasathyamurthy commented 3 years ago

@clnperez Here is an update, https://cloud.ibm.com/docs/ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform?topic=ibm-cloud-provider-for-terraform-db-provisioning-eu-de

Is this good now?

Thanks, Geetha

clnperez commented 3 years ago

I don't see an update there.

geethasathyamurthy commented 3 years ago

@clnperez

We have updated the statement in this location?

clnperez commented 3 years ago

Oh i see. I was suggesting not to add that, but to change the first sentence on the page to that. To know about the services provided in specific region and resource deployment, refer to, locations for resource deployment -> For more detailed information about services provided in specific regions and resource deployment, refer to locations for resource deployment.