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Slava landing copy #7

Closed coffeemug closed 8 years ago

coffeemug commented 8 years ago

Made some changes to the landing page copy. Not entirely happy with it, but I think it's better than what it was when I started. @mglukhovsky could use your comments.

mglukhovsky commented 8 years ago

Initial feedback! I've asked some other folks to review as well.

coffeemug commented 8 years ago

Ok, I made a bunch of changes to accommodate the feedback here. I covered a lot of the procedural stuff, but left a few of the more sophisticated things that require rethinking the copy. I'm going to do another pass tomorrow and fix up crappy writing ya'll pointed out.

mglukhovsky commented 8 years ago

@coffeemug, @mlucy: left a few more notes. We should merge this soon.

dalanmiller commented 8 years ago

The deploy has been updated, allow time for Jekyll to rebuild. https://deploy.rethinkdb.com:32774

dalanmiller commented 8 years ago

The deploy has been updated, allow time for Jekyll to rebuild. https://deploy.rethinkdb.com:32774

dalanmiller commented 8 years ago

The deploy has been updated, allow time for Jekyll to rebuild. https://deploy.rethinkdb.com:32774