Tom Petch's WG adoption comments

[italobusi]

The YANG import have revision dates which fix which version of the import is to be used and the dates are sure to change when the referenced I-D becomes an RFC. This is unusual.

Authors>> TBD

There is no history, nothing in the I-D, nothing AFAICT in the data tracker, to show the initial version and the split that took place. Needs recording and should be in the final RFC IMHO.

Authors>> TBD

See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/s705HTkui3tsTivyF6UB1HQA_XE/

[italobusi]

2022-10-06 Weekly call

Regarding the first comment, clarify that the import-by-revision is used to avoid compilation issues when the imported module (which is also work-in-progress) changes. The import-by-revision will be changed to a regular import once the imported modules are stable and before the WG LC of this draft.

Regarding the second comment, we can add an appendix as proposed in https://github.com/aguoietf/ietf-ccamp-otn-path-computation/issues/8

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[danielkinguk]

Appendix A. Change Log

The initial YANG data model requesting path computation in optical networks was draft-gbb-ccamp-optical-path-computation-yang-00. This document included path computation request capabilities for WSON, Flexi-Grid and OTN technologies. However, it was proposed at IETF 113 (March 25, 2022) to split the initial document into separate documents for WDM (WSON and Flexi-Grid) and OTN technologies, as each technology may be developed and implemented separately.

The WDM technology capabilities were kept in [draft-gbb-ccamp-optical-path-computation-yang], and the OTN capabilities were moved into a new document [draft-gbb-ccamp-otn-path-computation-yang].

Editors note, please remove this appendix before publication.

[italobusi]

Appendix A. Change Log

The initial YANG data model requesting path computation in optical networks was draft-gbb-ccamp-optical-path-computation-yang-00. This document included path computation request capabilities for WSON, Flexi-Grid and OTN technologies. However, it was proposed at IETF 113 (March 25, 2022) to split the initial document into separate documents for WDM (WSON and Flexi-Grid) and OTN technologies, as each technology may be developed and implemented separately.

The WDM technology capabilities were kept in [draft-gbb-ccamp-optical-path-computation-yang], and the OTN capabilities were moved into a new document [draft-gbb-ccamp-otn-path-computation-yang].

Editors note, please remove this appendix before publication.

Fixed in https://github.com/aguoietf/ietf-ccamp-optical-path-computation/commit/86594396fc6e749c848c4176b06a56a140712cba