Closed mcr closed 2 years ago
I suggest sticking to defined terminology such as 'conveyance protocol' instead of 'protecting protocols'. The 'kinds of information disclosed' is terminology for 'Claims'.
It might make sense to include the line "If there isn't confidentiality protection of Evidence and Attestation Results in the conceptual messages, the underlying conveyance protocol should provide these protections."
"for example, if there isn't object-level confidentiality protection of messages, then the transport protocol should provide it"
"If there isn't confidentiality protection of Evidence and Attestation Results in the conceptual messages, the underlying conveyance protocol should provide these protections."